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My Script Has Been Rent Asunder at The Proving Grounds!

I submitted another script to The Proving Grounds peer review at Comix Tribe, and this one got torn to ribbons. The story is Guards!, about¬†beautiful princess taken prisoner by an evil king, and the lowly dungeon guard who decides to rise up and rescue her himself. I was really confident about this one, but it didn’t do so well.

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Looks like I might have to go back to the drawing board on this one. Or maybe tweak it a little bit and find some other directions for it. Big thanks to the Comix Tribe editors for the review.


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